Talk:Sengoku Rance:Walkthrough/@comment-26544499-20200802174618/@comment-26544499-20200807172047

Yeah, it looks like I slipped up there.

Why does the line after "In a First Game, if the player goes to war against the Akashi House while still at peace with the Tanegashima House, the Mouri House will move in and conquer Tanegashima." contain a conditon that's not in this line? Shouldn't this line have a bit about being at war with Mouri?

I'd remove those "This is a reverse of the [...] invasion" lines. Someone else being invaded isn't the opposite of you being invaded. Just say that the two events are mutually exclusive.

Finally, I try to avoid using the words "at peace" or "is neutral". I don't want a reader to mistake it with a vassal. The best replacement that I've found is to describe what it's not, i.e. "neither conquered, vassled, nor at war with the Oda House".