User blog comment:Velt211/D.P.S. English translation/@comment-31720212-20200714174842/@comment-31720212-20200717031147

All right, I've been through all the scenarios I hadn't finished yet. I can't say I've seen all the game's text, but here's what I found.

DPS Interface

The playtime counter during a Happy End can and probably will overflow for most playthroughs. I'd recommend sticking a line break after "X minutes and"

What a Performer! Idol

Overflow:

Hey Mariko-chan, I got some clothes that might look good on you

Bad medical examination Male

Overflow:

Sorry, I was being rude. You\'re right, I should examine you. [end quote mark overflows]

Right, put your hands on the chair and use your elbows to....

Princess Fantasy Brute

Overflow: First of all, you'll call me Custom-sama from now on. Princess Linus, you're amazing. You don't come across such sha

Spelling: The menu command "watch silently" needs a leading caps So does "use your hands"

Other: PrincessLinus, do you always play around with monsters?

What a performer! Fan

Now is my chance. I'll tieHitomi-san's hands and... [missing space]

I want to know everything of Hitomi [strange phrasing]

As written, the code for generating the inventory list during the H-scene will write a space in front of the period (until you pick up the ping pong ball). If you move the spaces to the front of each item and "and" (and remove the space at the end of "I have "), you'll eliminate the problem. You might want to double check to be sure the fix is in place.

Bad medical examination Female

Overflow: Then won't you take off your clothes and lie down on the bed?

Apostrophes: I mean, it's 8 o  [presumably o'clock]

Spelling: Yumiko"that..thing." [caps] "ehm, It's embarrassing" [Ehm, it's embarrassing]

Overall, the games themselves are interesting enough. The Princess Fantasy Brute route feels like an early experiment with what would become Rance, but the Hero route was a more interesting game. I thought it was interesting how the two idol games changed Hitomi's personality between modes - it's not the same thing as changing the player's! The ease of failure in some of the games was a real pain, though, especially Bad Medical Examination Male, which is so twisty and deliberately bizarre that it felt like trying to escape a whirlpool. It does make me curious about the later DPS games, though!