User blog comment:Velt211/D.P.S. English translation/@comment-31720212-20200714174842

I just played through the "Good Knight" half of Princess Fantasy. Most of the text seems fine, but there are still a lot of text errors such as a lack of spaces next to character names/text variables and damage caused by apostrophes that haven't been properly escaped. A quick check suggests the Evil Knight scenario has quite a few more.

I'll include a list of the typos I've found but at this point I think you should really give the game another read-through yourself - since we're talking about incomplete sentences here, my notes run the risk of being confusing or misleading and it would probably be better if you check the text and make the fixes without me as an intermediary. Plus, you know the full text of the game better than me and can check for sentences I might have overlooked. Good luck!

Apostrophes: DPS manual -> Precautions, "It's not a microwave, it won" Manual -> Don

Bubububububu.... It

Princess please hold on for a bit longer. I

You want me to stop?? I

Let's see, she looks quite aroused already.. It

You managed to cut off my head [accidentally clicked before I could transcribe text]

The monster the princess' body

It doesn't matter anymore... I

It Custom you did your best

Speak lovingly -> two categories are incomplete at least

But now, I won

Please..don

Lack of spaces: Said princessLinusfrom behind my back PrincessLinusis the fourth princess Yay! ThatCustom. WillCustom's also melt and disappear? ItLinus's body is so I'm not sure if linusLinus[sic] Ii..!!Fu.. Looking at the playtime counter, you12 [sic] minutes and48 seconds

Overflow: Princess Linus refuses to move and stayed right there as if she was a

my life is important of course, but it's my mission to protect [overflows by just a few pixels]

Unclear or Multiple: Linus looked at me with wide eyes swept away a tear

gently and tenderly LinusOneby one

My 18 comrades were killed one by one by the monster