User blog comment:Velt211/Rance II translation port WIP/@comment-31720212-20200305080616

I don't mind doing an editing pass for you once it's closer to completion, if you're interested.

I'm not sure about the ZH 1 in camp, but off the top of my head, one solution would be to put another ZH 1 after each of the Q commands that saves the game.

For things like "Sil," you might want to use a program like Notepad++ to search for "Sil" (with the "whole word" option) across multiple files.