User blog comment:Velt211/D.P.S. English translation/@comment-31720212-20200714174842/@comment-31720212-20200715031915

Unfortunately, "What a performer!" is showing a lot of problems too under the microscope I haven't completed it yet, but I'll give you another list. After that I think I'll leave it to you, I won't look over the remaining scenarios for now.

Space:

Several times I see Hitomi's name squashed together with the letter I at the front, like "IHitomi". I guess it's a typo but I've seen it multiple times so I can't be sure.

I waited so I could driveHitomi-chan there

Apostrophes: That someone. Now way she'll date someone like you

It's still early though, so I'm sure you

good about her isn

"They" Thinking that, I headed to the dressing room.

Ah, maybe I shouldn

Dressing room scene: "Let" (with quotes) repeated frequently

It Oh, there

There's no way I

Also there was one line that was just:

Mariko"I"

Spelling: Eh1? I haven't though about it yet

This isn't the first time this happens

Other: Hitomi-san... kyaaa~!~! [first ~ hasn't been adjusted to large sized]